Battle Spirits

I see great prospect in this novel but, I hope you put " " during conversation and ' ' during the mind conversation to identify which is talking with mouth and talking in mind.The other novel is good too, just maybe, put this [ ] when system is issuing task, achievements, and promts. So that the paragraphs are more organized and make it easy to read.

This story is really good and it has a really nice build up

Good job with creating character dynamics. I really love how this is paced like I wanted to read more and more😍 Thank you for this wonderful book! There is a lot to uncover here🕵️

This novel masterfully weaves a poignant narrative around Daniel Jason, a young protagonist born with a rare cognitive disorder that renders him face-blind. As he navigates the treacherous landscape of bullying and social isolation, his gentle nature and striking features paradoxically draw people to him.The author skillfully crafts a world where Daniel's fragile existence is precarious, yet richly textured. His relationships, though fleeting, are authentic and heartfelt, making the cruel twists of fate all the more devastating.As Daniel's world unravels, the lines between reality and nightmare begin to blur. The author's thoughtful exploration of trauma, identity, and the human condition raises essential questions about the nature of existence.With its thought-provoking themes, well-developed characters, and evocative prose, this novel is a must-read for anyone who's ever felt like an outsider. Be prepared to immerse yourself in a world that's both beautiful and heartbreaking, and to emerge transformed by Daniel's unforgettable journey.It's a 100/10 dearNice work

I like how the story starts, and it seems to me that for now, the story doesn't pull punches as much as the average story would, which I like, I also like how well the Nameless boy(aristellus?) is portrayed, he's childish, but he also has the maturity of a traumatized child, which is like, keep cooking AuthorDidgeridoo out

HAHA I feel great I mean I have been wearing this types of clothes since I was a baby but staring at my reflection never gets old I suppose I am acting like a 'narcissist'

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After coming out of the shock Dante smiled and headed towards Lilly with a light smile on his lips.